Reflections on First Drafts
There is a notion
floating in writerdom that first drafts are garbage, bad, something to be overhauled,
repaired and refurbished beyond recognition.
In other words, “a
sh---y first draft,” as Anne Lamott put it in her book about writing, Bird by Bird. (She has a whole chapter called Shi—ty First Drafts.😳) It’s a brilliant
chapter, as is the whole book. It’s part of her battle cry against paralyzing
perfectionism, and in that sense, I concur.
But here is where we part. I have a much-published writing friend who said it differently, and I’m in his camp. “The first draft is where all the important stuff happens: Characters created, their actions emerge from an unformed blob of earth, and a rough shape of a story materializes. The rest is akin to a fine sculpturist working on refining the shape to make a beautiful polished marble figure.”
Junk? Na-ah. First
drafts are jewels in need of TLC and a fine polishing cloth to shine.
4 comments:
I agree with you. First drafts are the most essential part because that's where the story is. We "perfect" the story from there. First drafts are definitely diamonds in the rough.
I just finished a draft of a story and it's terrible. Maybe 3 good sentences. But one thing I've learned is that you have to have this exploratory draft with all its warts because just daydreaming doesn't make it happen. And I love to daydream...
Well said, Mirka.
I had an English professor who published some books. When she revised, she hated to give up well-crafted sentences from her first draft, but some no longer worked. So she created a folder where she kept the sentences she loved just in case they might come in handy later.
Love,
Janie
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