I was mulling over the strange creatures called Second
Drafts.
(Full disclosure, my WIP is now on its fifth draft, which is
not nearly as interesting)
So, if first drafts are the first-time words typed onto
a document (or penned on a page) and subsequent drafts are re-visioning aspects
of the story to a neater, shinier polish, what in the plumb-cake is worth noting
about draft number two?
To me, it turns out to be the very first time I meet the
story, as in, “Pleased to make your acquaintance, Story.”
Yeah, I wrote it. But while first drafting I was not fully conscious,
and I was not “other.” I lived it, suffered it, rejoiced with it, and finally collapsed
on my bed to rest when the whole adventure ended, hopefully in a fine resolution.
I try to neither look nor think of the story for a month
after first drafting. I am catching my breath the way one does after a race,
waiting for the steady pace of ordinary breathing and life to return. Only after that happens,
will I embark on the next stage, where I meet the story.
It’s an interesting experience. In the best case, I have to
force myself to stop after a daily portion of polish/add/strike out, usually not
exceeding two thousand words or so. When the story (which I had written, so you’d
think I should know how it goes) is riveting, it means that it’s working.
When it isn’t, I mull over why. Both happen even in the same
manuscript.
It’s a heady thing to be surprised by one’s own creative
choices. Think of it as a rare opportunity to make one’s own acquaintance.
Friends who are not writers have described something like it when remembering
something they had done or said which they long forgot. A friend to whom I quoted a
letter she had sent long ago put it this way: “Did I say this? That was very insightful
of me.”
Yes, second drafts are interesting. It’s worth first drafting
just to have the second draft experience.
I enjoyed hearing about this part of your writing journey. Since I don't write things longer than picture books, I don't have quite that kind of experience, but I am currently going through a lot of storage boxes trying to get rid of things. Some of those boxes contain things (like college papers) I wrote more than 50 years ago, so it's been interesting to meet afresh the writing of my younger self.
ReplyDeleteAh, yes, old friend from far away or long ago. It is surprising to realize that the quality of the prose is independent of how I felt about it when I was writing. I also try not to make judgments while drafting a story, even a short one.
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